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All Deviations
All Deviations


I,
Fly

with pain

across the street
my shoe
hit another window

no life flashed before my eyes.

I,
was almost a blank canvas.

well, until their words rang in my ears

I,
thought
“I love you.”

not

knowing if I’d die
©2006-2008 ~ShardaeRose1
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I wrote this soon after the hit and run accident... I still feel unsafe... This was originally written with a different structure that has to be seen... it reminded me of rolling off of the car. And the reason behind not putting a period at the end of any of the sentences is because I didn't have an end... I didn't die and for that I thank God.
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*Scarlatti:iconScarlatti: Nov 15, 2006, 4:55:01 AM
it's good to see you back :hug:
~Day-Dreamer07:iconDay-Dreamer07: Nov 15, 2006, 2:45:00 PM
wow...I picked up the image and story you painted exactly before I read the description...this was wonderfully done...


I'm sorry such pain had to come to achieve it, though..:hug: Let me know if there's anything I can do. :)

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:rose:Let us live so that when we come to die, even the undertaker will be sorry. ~ Mark Twain

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